Saturday, 4 April 2015

Trapped in a swirl

Spinning and turning in a never ending whirl.
Only this is no funfair.
Spin to the right,
Low mood heightens pain.
Spin to the left,
Pain lowers mood.
Up and down.
Round and round.
Always swirling this way and that.
Trapped on a never ending waltzer
Only this is no funfair. 

Inspired by Magaly Guerrero and her prompts for Aprils NaPoWriMo 2015.

4th of April 2015
Feeling So Deeply It Hurts
With this poem, show how an emotion might increase physical pain, and vice versa.


  1. Those ups and downs and round and round can be exhausting... But we shall paddle on! ♥

  2. Balance is a hard thing to find when navigating through pain

  3. A feeling of dizziness through the middle of it all. I like the back and forth. Feels like it's actually moving on the page. Impressive!


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